This is my 100 word entry this week. A while ago I started writing a story through these entries and I would like to pick up where I left off. Before reading this you might want to read my entries titled
The endless obsession : http://mythoughtsonthesubjectareasfollows.blogspot.com/2011/02/endless-obsession.html
The moment I knew: http://mythoughtsonthesubjectareasfollows.blogspot.com/2011/02/moment-i-knew.html
Caught: http://mythoughtsonthesubjectareasfollows.blogspot.com/2011/03/caught.html
I felt my head spinning as I started to speak. Trying to find the right words to say at this very wrong time felt impossible. She asked again. "Who are you?" I managed to whisper. "Im sorry to worry you. You remind me of someone I lost 20 years ago. My.. "
She interrupted me politely. "Mam, You look like you are going to be sick."
I guess its a myth that if you truly love someone you can tell them anything. I couldnt seem to make my head, heart and mouth connect. Now was my chance, and Im blowing it.
This is for http://www.velvetverbosity.com/
This is really gripping. I'm glad you're back at your story. The premise is great.
ReplyDeleteI'm so glad you are continuing this story. This is very poignant.
ReplyDeleteIt's good that each 100 Word 'episode' can stand on its own. That, I would think, is as it should be. Well done, here. I like this very much. I think I've been there.
ReplyDeleteGreat use of the prompt. You've built up the tension nicely with this.
ReplyDeleteI agree that it's great that this piece can stand alone. It's definitely compelling.
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